Respected sir,
I am class 12 student, 2020
Roll no.[protected]
Subject - english (301)
Application no. - r50850 (Photocopy)
I applied for reevaluation but my other 5 requested question not checked.
In first time, it is likely that it is checked by another subject teacher and had not confirmation of what number to be given. First they give 6 marks and then 4 marks out of 10 marks.in which i am correct and available of getting 8 -9 marks.
Sir, please...
I humbly request to see my other claimed 5 questions in which some answer totally matched and some approximately describe the same meaning as in marking scheme. But these answers are either cutted or firstly mark given then deducted by that other subject teacher. Sir
sir like in answer (1.1b) on page no. 9, 10 it is cutted my answer was right and number was not given.
Similarly in answer (1.2c) as per marking scheme defined anyone of the given word (Helpful, responsible, quick, very efficient) will be taken correct. I write all four of them. But half marks deducted. And there is no mark to be deducted in usage, grammar, spelling or writing as per marking scheme.
sir, in answer (5) on page no. 19, 20, 21
I try my best to describe about national integration and journey in report.
When and where i went in festival. I also mentioned about observations on the festival and national integration and talk about suggestion on these festivals which make unity among indians with their diverse culture.
All above defined are according to cbse marking scheme. But previously given 6 marks and then 4 marks. (Like children playing with marks) 6 marks are cutted out of 10 marks, so on which i get marks and where cut. Sir.
Format - 1 mark
Content - 5 marks
Grammar spelling - 2 marks
Coherence and relevence of idea-2 marks
I describe all suggested points. And have only one grammar mistake. But at place of 2 marks, 6 marks cutted sir. Kindly see this question and reevaluate. I desire it to be 8-9 marks, sir.
sir, in answer (6) on page 22, 23, 24
In speech i write about electricity in our daily life. How its produces and all applications help in life. I try my best to describe abot how to save electricity practically at different like homes, schools, offices, industry, etc. We will have to take some serious initiatives steps for future use of these thing produce by nature resources like water in dam. All points mentioned according to marking scheme. But previously (6+1/2) mark given then it changes to 6 marks. And
Format - 1 mark
Content - 5 marks
Grammar spelling - 2 marks
Coherence and relevence of idea-2 marks
Sir please see this answer i had no mistake but 4 marks cutted without any reason
I desired it to be 9-10 marks. Sir.
sir, in answer no. (8) on page no. 4, 5, 6
In (8b) in this answer i try my best to give most of the positive qualities of subbu, like he is `always helpful in most aspect`, ' a talented actor', he has a' generous heart' and 'respect elder and his boss' and he work on his principle.' sir only two points is necessary but write 4-5 points. I desire to get 2 marks.
sir, in (8c), i describe both the incident, when the william o. Douglas was a small child and went with with his father on river. William then totally covered with water, his fear start from that day.
But again he thinks and an incident of ymca pool happen. He was likely to dead and after many practise he cannot come out, then he totally terrorised from water.
This is all according to marking scheme and ther is no mistake. My desire is 2 marks sir.
sir, in answer (8 d), i write about why shakespeare a wicked for slum children as they are weak has worst condition. They have not sufficient to eat. And they have weak concentration. Due to this they even not know alphabet of english but shakespeare know english and was a good poet, then also his picture cannot do for them.
The map is a bad example as for slum children. Their world is only their slum which is outside window of class where slum people were working.
This is all according to marking scheme and there is no mistake. My expectation is 2 marks sir.
in (8g), i describe about gondwana a huge land mass and this total breaks into our world now and part of it is divided into india, subcontinent and south america, africa, and atlantic (Which is a frigid zone.) which is due to climate and conditions change.
This is all according to marking scheme and ther is no mistake. My desire is 2 marks sir.
sir, in answer 9, on page no. 7.
In this answer i try best to describe about horrible working conditions of bangle maker. They have no goal of life to make life better as their life is only destiny of their.
They have no stable home, get very low wages for their dangerous work. Their elder even get blind also and cannot take care of thier family.
Small children are forcedfully worked by people which are blind to hold their ancestors bussiness (Bangle making) working and for taking care of family.
Above all are according to marking scheme but i get only 3 marks.
In which
Content - 3 marks
Grammatical accuracy - (1+1/2) marks
Coherence and ideas and style - (1+1/2) marks
I written all correct but only 3 marks given.
My desire is to get 6 marks. I written total content have no mistake.
In this way my right answer marks deducted. Sir. Kindly see this answer and reevaluate it. Sir.
sir, in answer no. 10 on page no. 8
I try to describe about many precautions taken for smooth conducting of o level exam
Like
Governor of prison called to oxford and tell about evans a jail bird.
Then paper held in jail.
A teacher (Mc. Lerry) came.
Mc. Lerry bag is checked.
Stephen and jackson called for inspection.
Microphone is adjusted in prison.
All harmful things removed.
The correction slip is checked before giving to evans.
Governor listen audio from microphone.
All above points are mentioned in my answer and satisfied marking scheme points. But i got only 3 marks. Sir. My desire is upto 5-6 marks.
In this way my some number are cutted without any reason even i am totally correct from marking scheme of cbse.
Due to another teacher checked it previously so, in reevaluation these are not checked and increase of marks not done. Sir.
Sir, please i humbly request to reevaluate it sir. And please give marks.
There can be an increment of more than 15 marks,. Sir
I supposed that i will get justice.
Thank you.
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